Angel of Death

Hey Ky! Dawson drank deeply from the bottle of whiskey, his throat muscles bulging and jacking. I don't think that 'bulging' and 'jacking' are the right words. It just messes ...

Hey Ash! Awe darn I wish I would've got here sooner. Looks like Sunny and Luccy picked out all the nit-picks but I loved this chapter and I am eager ...

Bonjour Suze! J'ai adoré ce! Aline seems like a great character and I like how she thinks. I only found two things to nit-pick Aline forced her eyes to stay ...

Ky! I'm sorry but I was really enjoying this and didn't see anything to nit-pick about. Phoebe is a good character, she's so mysterious and I like how she thinks. ...

Hey there 'Stoney can I call you Stone? Well anyways, I'm Angel of Death but please, you can call me Angel or Angie. Welcome to YWS, hopefully you stay for ...

This song made me both smile and cry. It was beautiful and I can see myself listening to this on my I-pod. Are you apart of a band? I visited ...

Hey Ash! After Cassandra finished checking the rest of my body, including my bruised arm and ribs, she released me from her care, telling—no, rather ordering me to get some ...

Hey Clo! Her scrunched up grinning freckled face was in the papers and, every morning for a few weeks, mothers shook their heads and drank their coffee over it. I ...

Hey Ky! Her crooked, carcassed teeth. Stained and rusty. A row of poisoned, sick trinkets. Unevenly space, rotting, atrocious in their foulness. Usually I don't mind when you use fragments, ...

Hey there Sunny! Ooh I am excited to read this. Sorry if I repeat anything lucy found. I agree with her on the beginning. I liked it but it really ...

Hey there! Well, I see you're new so welcome to YWS. Hopefully, you'll like it here, but anyways, I'm Angel of Death but please just call me Angie or Angel. ...

Ky I love you. This was just brilliant! I couldn't stop reading to the end and like Connie I can't say anything bad about this because this was beautifully constructed, ...

Hey Ash! Well, it looks like Sunny already nit-picked everything. This was written really well and I like the twist and the originality to this chapter. Though it wasn't eventful, ...

Howdy Clo! Well this written amazingly well and I couldn't stop reading it from start to finish. Usually when people write stories that don't have a lot of dialogue in ...

Hey KJ! I nodded, thinking. I would have to snatch the TV remote from Mom in the car so she wouldn’t turn to the news. I had to keep what ...